小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

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My new teacher is a man.His name is Bob.I think that he come from China.He is a handsome man.He stay at Dongjie street.He is 30 old.He often play with us,because he love we very much,so we are all like him.He doesn't often arrangement homework to me.Because he is sure we don't like do homework.So we are all like him.i hope that he always is my teacher!