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The Advantages of Ecotourism Recently,people increasingly pay more attention to scotourism.Clean water,fresh air,thick foreast and abundant species have appealed to the people under social pressure and living in bad environment. Ecotourism has many advantages that people could enjoy nature and learn more native culture and customs.Meanwhile,the growing tourism could promote local economic development.
