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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4573
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题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分64.0分
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可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。

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The impact of the internet on interpersonal communication The computer widely used so that impact interpersonal communication. The internet world is so fanastic. It make us all addicated to it. most of us would choose to play computer rather than stay at home in free time. There is no doubt that internet is disadvatage to interpersonal communication.Firstly,we will become more indifference as we is lack of facing to face communicate.Secondly, it will make our family moe inhumanity as we are lack of talking. Thirdly,there will be so quiet in our class party becasuse we all scan net by telephone. It so terrible! I even can't to wonder that we don't how to talk about when we meet. So, we should to get out of house. Don't alaways paly computer to stay at home. In order to make our family more happy we should talk more with our parent. Our world is so colorful!

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