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作者词汇基础不错，在学术词汇的积累上还要再接再厉；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
Recently,people increasingly pay more attention to ecotourism.Clean water,fresh air,thick foreast and abundant species have appealed to the people under social pressure and living indreadful environment. Ecotourism has many advantages that people could enjoy nature and learn more native culture and customs.People will be alerted to the necessity of ecological protection by ecotourism.Meanwhile,the growing tourism could promote local economic development.People living in big cities full of pollution would like to travel to somewhere clean and silent.But general tourist may be too commercialize.Ecotourism provide them with an admirable opportunity to take a great break or escape from daily pressure.Flowing river,singing birds and thick forest,everything has been a superb relax. In my opinion,everything has two sides.On the contrary,ecotourism will bring negative effects at the same time.The growth of ecotourism may change the native’s mind to earn more money rather than to maintain the ecological balance.People gathering may destroy local economy.In addition, overdevelopment will cause destructive collapse to the economy.Generally,holding on to the sustainable development could lead us to a long-term development.Enjoying ecotourism and protecting the economy are both equally important.
