2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

作者词汇基础扎实；句式变化多样；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

In our country,the standard of urbanization is crease so that there are the increasing number of population and the government fund to develop health care systems.In terms of short sight,people pursue their own happiness per person per day.But the side of long sight,this is fact that the standard of living is rapidly decreasing.so,I intend to analyze the situation,including the reasons and solutions. The first thing we think of the environment are polluted by people who living in the cities.I think the citizens are not lack of environmental protection consciousness but in recent years,the development of industrialization are rapidly cause to people who work in factories missioned "three wastes" ,the substances are harmful to our health and all the pollution on the surrounding environment].and then,that is health problems],for instance,as people ideas are changed,they choose have fast food and junk food which like Mc downloads before they went to work in order to not to be late and convenience.the situation easily lead to the issue of food security,the last one,it is not doubly that youth have to be face to pressure of work cause by the increasing number of population.So ,nowadays, the rate of unemployment steady rising every year. As for it,we must be take some measurements in order to improve our life.Such as the government advocate to advance green technology and greening.they can fund to contribute to green belts around the area of industry,in terms of individual,it ought to strengthen the health consiousness and learn to adjust to ourselves emotion. I wish the standard of life will improve in the future.