2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

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In our country,the standard of urbanization is crease so that there are the increasing number of population and the government fund to develop health care systems.In terms of short sight,people pursue their own happiness per person per day.But the side of long sight,this is fact that the standard of living is rapidly decreasing.So,I intend to analyze the situation,including the reasons and solutions. The first thing we think of the environment are polluted by people who living in the cities.I think the citizens are not lack of environmental protection consciousness but in recent years,the development of industrialization are rapidly cause to people who work in factories missioned "three wastes" ,the substances are harmful to our health and all the pollution on the surrounding environment.And then,that is health problems,for instance,as people ideas are changed,they have fast food and junk food which like Mc downloads.The situation lead to the issue of food security,the last one,it is not doubly that youth have to be face to working pressure cause by the increasing number of the population.So nowadays, the rate of unemployment steady rising every year. As for it,we must be take some measurements in order to improve our life.Such as the government should improve green technology and greening.They can contribute to green belts around the factory,pearsonally,I think it ought to improve the health consciousness and learn to adjust to ourselves emotion. I wish the standard of life will improve in the future.