2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

学术词汇需要继续积累，单词拼写不错；很好的运用了从句，但部分句子稍有瑕疵；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

Nowadays，the planes are popular with people who around the world，so，it is used to a variety of aspects，such as the transport of fruit and vegetables，traveling，the development of the aerospace industry.However，as for the fund problem of air travel，in recent year，some people think the fund should cheap in order to people travel to where they want to places at any time，on the contrary，others argue long-distance flight easily cause to environmental pollution so that its price need to rise than the past. Many people state that air travel is cheap.This is the fact that long-distance flight is cheap have many of advantages，on one side，the local tourism industry will be not develop rapidly than other countries if the number of outbound travel is becoming less and less，this is reason why air travel is cheap.On the other side，people can enjoy the convenience which shortening the journey time so that plane is the preferred means of transportation when they go to travel. On the contrary，the opposite side hold that its price should more expensive.As for this point，they believe long-distance flight cause to the environmental problems，which is air pollution and noise pollution.In recent years，the statistics show that the number of aircraft emissions of carbon dioxide on the rise，while in many countries，many citizens who living near by the airport,complain there are noise pollution effect on their formal life and hope expensive in order to prevent the situation. To sum up，personally，I believe the price should reasonable，that is to say not only considerate to advantages but also disadvantages when the government set the price.