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Save Money And Enjoy Life The universal phenomenon that human are careful with money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons; we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale,such as these.However,why we do like these? why we make us enjoy life? Don‘t get me wrong. I‘m not saying we should not save money. I’m not even advocating a mass movement to resist the savings,and then use us money in extravagant consumption. But I’m saying that all of us need to think more serious about smart consumers. perhaps, we can either save money and enjoy life. Save doesn't meat stingy. We can use money in our control. What's more, the way of saving didn't just in money. For instance, save water,save electric,save paper,save anything precious resources,and so on. That‘s can also helpful in our save money,kill two birds. In these time,people save money because in different reasons. And different countries different culture so that different opinion. Also,we are during the period of economic recovery,some people’s economic are not very good. Of couse,someone was poor in them life,no matter today or old-time.In china, people's economic more and more better, but smart consumers is still poor.We usually save money and waist resources. That's not good. Today, only can we change our mind,we would really understand what life we want and what saving we know. All in all,we could both save money and enjoy life.