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邢台二中2012―2013学年上学期高二年级期末测试试卷英语作文

发布时间:2013-05-17 17:27浏览次数:6627[网页划词已开启]
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2010年以来,我国相继发生了几起校园暴力事件,使国人为之震惊,震惊之余,大家都陷入了沉思:我们该如何加强校园安全呢?请你以How to improve school safety为题,写一篇120词左右的短文。
参考词汇:校园campus 保安security guard
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since 2010, there was several cases of campus violence happened in our country , many students was suffering abuse in these years , i think that we must to improve the security in each schools to help students against campus violence , there is several ways to improve the security first , increase the number of security guard is one of effective ways to prevent student from abusing , it is because it will be more easy to find out who is suffering violence abuse when it happen second, it is also important to teach every students to respect and love their schoolmates , when they know why they need to respect their schoolmates , i believe it will turn out to be a pleasant learning atmosphere and the school will be more safety

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