广东江门市福泉奥林匹克学校2013届九年级月考试卷英语作文

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I love to travel in any other cities or other countries。I have been to some mountains、Rivers。Sea is my favourite place。I like to see sunrise at the side of sea。 Last year，i went to the bohai sea。In the morning，we went to the beach，the sun was't appearing，so we wait some minutes，during this，we picked some beautiful rocks，i like them very much。 At seven，we saw the sunrise。It is amazing！How beautiful it is！ Although we have been to the sea，i want to go to the sea and eat some fishes in the future。