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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；作者学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间，词汇表达灵活性也要提高，单词拼写错误较多；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。
as the development of technology,the interner are becoming more and more popular in our daily life, whcih shrinks the distance between people.It enables us to keep in touch whenever it is and wherever we are.In theory, it should have enclosed the relationship.In practise,however,we are so addicted to the interner that neglect the people around us,leading more distance.In my view,electronic communincation can not replace face-to-face contact. on one hand,compared to face-to-face contact,electronic communication can not express our feelings exactly.on the other hand,face-to-face contact can strengten our relationship with others.let's express our heart to our freinds and family face-to-face instead of using the cold words on the internt.
