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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12934
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量,注意几处拼写错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

As the development of technology,the internet are becoming more and more popular in our daily life, which shrinks the distance between people.It enables us to keep in touch whenever it is and wherever we are.In theory, it should have enclosed the relationship.In practise,however,we are so addicted to the interner that neglect the people around us,leading more distance. In my view,electronic communication can not replace face-to-face contact. on one hand,compared to face-to-face contact,electronic communication can not express our feelings exactly.On the other hand,face-to-face communication can strengthen our relationship with others.Let's express our heart to our freinds and family face-to-face instead of using the cold words on the internt.

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