2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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firstly,welcome to china to said,our hometown have plenty of scence,for example,HuangLAN river,Dig Dragen Point,DouShaGuan,and so on. However,i will recomend HuangLan River for him Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown，what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?firstly,welcome to china to said,our hometown have plenty of scence,for example,HuangLAN river,Dig Dragen Point,DouShaGuan,and so on. However,i will recomend HuangLan River for him Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown，what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?