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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9059
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

用户的作文(系统评分61.0分
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使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇,但词汇表达多样性不高,拼写检查还需加强;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

From this picture I can knew than a student is asking a teacher :"Once I leaen how to use Goofle,isn't that all the education I really need?" With the rapid development of technology,Internet have been so popular in our life.We use computer to chat with others ,shop in the webside and study and so on .Internet have been on a regular basis in our life.At the aspect of bad ,we surf the Internet when we meet some question we do not know ,but we kown the answer do not konw the reason,which make us lose the ability of thinking on our own.on the other hand ,Internet is good at our study,we can sereach imformation what we can not learn in class and textbook.we can expand our mind .and we can discuss some study methoy with others in the Internet and so on. above of it,which is my opionon in the impact of the Internet of learning.

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