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能够使用一些简单的从句；作者词汇表达较丰富，但请仔细检查词汇的拼写；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
with the develop of the world and the increasing rhythm of our life,the explosive of information has permeate our a veriety of life.There are so many new words are create through online or communicate everday day.However,information is so much that we people can not all use it,there is indeed to require people to identify the valuable information for themself. A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention,such as innovative and creative brand.The advertise usualy is simple but meaningful.It's often attract customers' and clients' attention at a first sight and make interest on it.But foremost and the most important,we should not confusion by what it's preach.For one's begin,We should not make decision to buy something at first when we find a attractive advertise and refer some evaluats about it through the internet.From another side,make sure what you trend and abtract what is truly connotation. Nowaday,there is indeed some worries about the information explosion,but we should take a sense of confidence and hope to believe that it also can bring advance to our society.If we take a clear ming and we can use it correctly.
