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文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但学术词汇表达还需要很大提升；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
With the development of the world and the fast pace of our life,the information explosion has permeate our a variety of life.There are so many new words are create through online and communicate in the everyday.However,information is so much that we people can not all use it,there is indeed to require people to identify the valuable information for themselves. A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention,such as innovative and creative brand.The advertising usually is simple but meaningful.It's often attract customers' and clients' attention at a first sight and make interest on it.But foremost and the most important,we should not confusion by what it's preach.For one's begin,We should not make a decision to buy something at first when we find a attractive advertise and refer some evaluates about it through the internet.From another side,make sure what you trend and abstract what is truly connotation. Nowaday,there is indeed some worries about the information explosion,but we should take a sense of confidence and hope to believe that it also can bring advance to our society.If we take a clear ming and we can use it correctly.
