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文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但学术词汇表达还需要很大提升；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
With the development of the world and the fast pace of our life,the information explosion has permeate to our life.There are so many new words are created through online and communicate in the everyday.However,information is so much that we can not all use it,there is indeed to require people to identify the valuable information for themselves. A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention,such as innovative and creative brand.The advertising usually is simple but meaningful.It's often attract customers' and clients' attention at a first sight and make interest on it.But foremost and the most important,we should not be confused by what it's preach.We should not make a decision to buy something at first when we find a attractive advertise，referring some evaluates about it through the internet.From another side,make sure what you trend and abstract what is truly connotation. Nowaday,there is indeed some worries about the information explosion,but we should take a sense of confidence and hope to believe that it also can bring advance to our society.If we take a clear mind and we can use it correctly.
