作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;作者词汇表达不够多样,要注意单词拼写的检查;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Things are comlicated,and we can hardly totally understand one thing in a second.Some stuff are not the same as it shows.It is unwise to draw a immedate conclusion as soon as we see or hear. The reasons why we can not draw a conclusion as soon as we see or hear are as follows.First of all,some people are not what they shows up.People do stuff with many reasons.Some stuff are not what they really want to.We can not judge a person with something he does.Next, some things are not the same as what they appear.We may be confused with some things like the beautiful but deathful mushrooms.What's more,we can absolutely believe what we see or what we hear.Many scientific report shows that people's hearing or visualty are not that true.We might be cheated by ourselves. Generally speaking,we should do some research to draw a conclusion instead of believing what we see or hear completely.
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