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字数：300 满分：100分
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During the last past three years,we have multiplied our possessions and spend too recklessly, but we neglect that our environment becomes worse and more fragile. Maybe my hometown is just the whole of nature in microcosm. In the evening,we can catch a clear view upwards of the spotlit temple, while we can not even see a light of shining star and brilliant moom. In childhood,the most romatic thing is to stare up at the starry. During the daytime,the noisy from the working shovels spoils the quitness of the country and musk interfers the flowing of the stream.What's more,filthy street replaces the winding lane. Instead of clear water,the sewage decimate thrving population of fish. There is no more babbling brook, no more fresh air,no tranquility any more.Hazy sunshime and exhaust fume are mixed with my affilcting thought.My hometown, I miss you.
