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字数：300 满分：100分
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In the past three years,we have multiplied our possessions and spend too recklessly, but we neglect that our environment becomes worse and more fragile. Maybe my hometown is just the whole of nature in microcosm. In the evening,we can catch a clear view upwards of the spotlit temple, while we can not even see a light of shining star and brilliant moon. In childhood,the most romantic thing is to stare up at the starry. During the daytime,the noisy from the working shovels spoils the quietness of the country and musk interferes the flowing of the stream.What's more, filthy street replaces the winding lane. Instead of clear water,the sewage decimate thriving population of fish. There is no more babbling brook, no more fresh air,no tranquility any more.Hazy sunshine and exhaust fume are mixed with my afflicting thought.My hometown, I miss you.
