2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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The Influence of Good Habits With the time going by, we have our own opinions to things and we highly feel that good habits are good for our life. As the popular saying goes,"Good habits result from resisting temptation." I cannot agree with it more. For example, if someone develop a habit that he should writing a compasition at 7:00am every day, he will not doanything and get up on time. This habit help him resist the temptation of sleeping late. Good habits canhelp us live a better life. For instance, if you have a habit of reading books, you will get more and more knowledge. If you have a habit of exercising, you will become healthier and healthier. If you have a habit of talking with others , you will have more and more friends. Look! Good habits have so great influence to us. Let's develop good habits and live a better life.Let's leve away from bad temptation and live a healthy life.