文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累学术词汇,拼写错误也要注意;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
As reform of China,the english become more popular to learn,at first it aims to go foreign countries such as The United State for a better life because of high salary.Now it complete dues to gaokao for attending to a good college.Since that students rather litsening and reading than writing because the exam almost owns much reading and listening opposite writing.As the result of it.there is a little attention on spelling.Then it causes more and more serious in this situation. To turn it to opposite,i advise students should focus on the spelling as well as reading and listening.So how to get it?I have some advises about changing it.At first,you should put that priority in the process of learning english.And you also develop a habit of learning english which make learning english being a part of your life.