作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用学术词汇;能够简单运用一些从句;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
As reform of China,the english become more popular to learn,at first, it aims to go foreign countries such as The United State for a better life because of high salary.Now it complete dues to college entrance examination for attending to a good college.Since that students rather litsening and reading than writing because the exam almost owns much reading and listening opposite writing.As the result of it,there is a little attention on spelling.Then it causes more and more serious in this situation. To turn it to opposite,i advise students should focus on the spelling as well as reading and listening.So how to get it?I have some advises about changing it.At first,you should put that priority in the process of learning english.And you also develop a habit of learning english which make learning english being a part of your life.