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Every coin has two sides.It's hard to decide that whether is right or wrong to put all egs in one basket.In my opinion,this thing has both advantages and disadvantages. We can't predict future,just we don't know what will happen next time.We may lose our thing we have.What if we put all things on ourselfs,it occured that we lose everything.In this way, it's misadventure to put all the risks and opportunities on self. How can we solve this problem?In my opinion,in the one hand,a plan B is necessary.When the plan A was broke,a plan B may be crucial.B can help you get out of the trouble.On the other hand,it may be a good thing.because pressure can stimulate people and create people'potential.