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作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
In the present society，more and more cars appear.For this problem, people have different views.Some of them think it is convenient for their life,but others argue that the opposite is true. For some office workers, on the one hand, the car is convenient, comfortable, more is to save money, on the other hand, a symbol of the car for them is a wealth. Moreover, effects of the car can also protect you from bad weather. However, some people do not think so. They think the car will cost a lot of money, such as petrol, parking fees, there may be a traffic ticket. Also, there are more and more cars will cause traffic jams, traffic will be a high risk operation. Air pollution and noise pollution, more need not say more.As we all know, gasoline is now a valuable energy source, the emergence of a large number of car is a waste of resources. These are their opinions. However, in my opinion, the car is actually a double-edged sword, mainly depends on whether you can use it reasonably. If used properly, it will bring benefits. But, on the contrary, you use is not reasonable, it will only lead to disaster.
