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2013考研英语二图表作文预测:中国城市事故

发布时间:2013-07-05 15:54浏览次数:2871
要求:

The table below gives information about the numbers of accidents in a Chineses City in 2005. Write an essay of 160-200 words. Your essay should

1、describe the accidents in a chinese city

2、possible reasons

3、give your comment

You should write neatly on your ANSWER SHEET2.

用户的作文(系统评分88.0分
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过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活。

用户练习作文:

From the above chart we can see that the number of accidents in 2005 were raised nearly 41% than that of 2004.Totally,there were five mains accident causes which leaded to those accidents.The first was that drivers turning left without due care ,which conducted 608 of accidents that was 10% higher than that of 2004,and the following four reasons were :divers traveling too close to other vehicles,pedestrians crossing roads carelessly,drivers driving under the influence of alcohol,drivers failing to give a signal,which leaded to 411,401 ,281and246 of accidents.When compared with 2004,the numbers were raised 9%,12%,15% and declined 5%. Two reasons attributed this phenomenon.Firstly,people was larked of the sense of security.Secondly,there were too many transportation tools to management. As far as i'm concerned,our governor should take actions, such as cut down the members of cars and set up some laws to limit peoples conduction, to change this consequence.

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