2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

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many people say if you do one thing ,you must go ahead without another choose. However, it's not compeletly right. sometimes it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket. it means that you are not a man of afriad ,but a man of thinking around. th e best example is the bank. we know that bank face the huge risk about loan .it may be not get back the money that is lent to person, company or goverment and suffers a great lose. in order to decrease the risk ,the bank usually gives loan to different groups. therefore, just several loans can't be gived back don't have a great impact on the bank. in conclusion, we must think all the ways and repare at least two plans before do things. only follow it,you can be calm when face troubles.