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I'm glad to your's coming.My home lies in the west of China which you can gain some fresh air. You will like it. It's Qing zhanggayuan you maybe have hear before.There are lots of gress , sheep , cow and house. They running in the gree that the noise and press will be forgot.I't a good place to relaxing and traveling where you can comprese with natrue.