2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I'm glad to your coming.My home lies in the west of China which you can take fresh air. You will like it. It's Hungarian where you maybe have heared before.There are lots of gress , sheep , cow and house. They running in the gree that the noise and press will be forgot.I't a good place to relaxing and traveling where you can comprese with natrue.