2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I't is nice to your coming.My home lies in the west of China which you can take fresh air. I guess you will like it. It's Hungarian where you maybe have heared before.Because there are lots of gress , sheep , cow and house. They running in the gree that the noise and press will be forgot.I't a good place to relaxing and traveling where you can comprese with natrue.