2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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It's good to have you here.My home lies in the west of China which you can take fresh air. I guess you will like it. It's Hungarian where you maybe have hared before.Because there are lots of grass,sheep,cow and house. Due to see they are running in the grass freely,the noise and press will be forgot.I't a good place to relaxing and traveling where you can comprese with natrue.