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My hometown is Foshan which gets to be known as the ceremic city. I was born here, grew up here and certainly know much of its history for I am part of it. If there was a chance that a foreign friend of mine is going to visit Foshan, the very first place I would prefer to introduce to him or her is Nanfeng Guzao, where folk artists set stands to sell their pottery masterpieces and where tourists can get a try to create one work of his or her own.