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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40891
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;请作者提高词汇表达丰富度,另外请加强单词拼写的检查;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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It's unwised to make a conclusion for you are listening or seeing something immediately.The reasons are as follows. Firstly,we usually draw a conclusion throughting a lot of experiments.In this way the conclusion is more objective.once you see or listen something,you make a conclusion immediately.It seems subjective.Secondly,the world exits the white lie.Telling a lie is a bad behaviour but the white lie is a kind action.Under the circumstance of the white lie to make a conclusion immediately is appearencely unwised.Thirdly,if you see or listen something ,then make a conclusion immediately. It may cause some disunderstandings. Therefore,before making a conclusion we should think over again and again.Only in this way can we make a wised conclusion.

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