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It's unwised to make a conclusion for you are listening or seeing something immediately.The reasons are as follows. Firstly,we usually draw a conclusion throughting a lot of experiments.In this way the conclusion is more objective.once you see or listen something,you make a conclusion immediately.It seems subjective.Secondly,the world exits the white lie.Telling a lie is a bad behaviour but the white lie is a kind action.Under the circumstance of the white lie to make a conclusion immediately is appearencely unwised.Thirdly,if you see or listen something ,then make a conclusion immediately. It may cause some disunderstandings. Therefore,before making a conclusion we should think over again and again.Only in this way can we make a wised conclusion.
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