2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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If my foregin fridend is going to visit my hometown ,I will take her to around the many of interesting place of my hometown, First day ,we will go to the Feishan mountain ,we will climb the peak of the mountain. He will see many beautiful scenery. When we reach here ,we can