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My school is very beautiful. It is in Henson, near the Qiandeng Lake. Do you know it? It is Nanhai Experimental Primary School. I like my school very much.There is a big playground in my school. We have P.E. class on the playground. My classroom is on the fifth floor. It is big and clean. The computer rooms are on the third floor. There is the library on the second floor. There are many books in the library. The teachers in my school are very kind. The students are very polite and smart.