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GRE写作Issue模拟题:The Importance of Science and Art

发布时间:2013-07-19 16:34浏览次数:8499
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Directions: Present your perspective on one of the issues below, using relevant reasons and/or examples to support your views.  “The function of science is to reassure; the purpose of art is to upset. Therein lies the value of each.”

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文章词汇表达要更加熟练,希望能更多使用一些学术词汇;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。

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The participants are teachers and students from the No.9 Middle School in Huainan. Students are from grade eight. First, we choose randomly 100 compositions from different grade eight students. Then, let another 40 students do a set of test (See appendix). Last, some of them are chosen randomly to have a related interview after the test. Why choose grade eight junior students as participants? Since they have been learning English for at least 2 years, some even have more than 2 years. In other words, all the participants have some basic English knowledge. Grade nine students have higher level of English, because they are preparation for the high school entrance exam. They may have the same level as the superior students by high intensity training. As for grade seven students, they are new to junior middle school English curriculum and may have no systematic grammar knowledge about English. Therefore, grade eight students are the best choice.

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