GRE写作Issue模拟题:The Importance of Science and Art

作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。

two factors above could be attributed to personal efforts, this one was caused by outside factor. Mainly based on the interview, some students said that they were confused and puzzled when teachers were explaining regularities of English grammar. For example, when teachers were teaching the concept of plural nouns generally, junior students might not understand what were the real plural nouns. Whereas, if teachers referred to some detailed examples like police,people and so on. Then, these students might know these words easily and clearly. These students would form vivid pictures of these words which stood for group or flock and they would not use these plural nouns in single form. It was common to see this kind of error in the non-native language environment.