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GRE写作Issue模拟题:The Importance of Science and Art

发布时间:2013-07-19 16:34浏览次数:8503
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Directions: Present your perspective on one of the issues below, using relevant reasons and/or examples to support your views.  “The function of science is to reassure; the purpose of art is to upset. Therein lies the value of each.”

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Inspired by the previous research, the present author would like to give some suggestions for further study. (1) There should be more subjects, in other words, more students should be interviewed and more compositions would be checked. (2) More methods should be adopted to the research and the results would be more exact. More ways should be used to analyze these datas. (3) Collecting data should use more time, that was, the process of checking compositions should start earlier in order to get whole data.

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