文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
dear john: I am terribly sorry to tell you that l don't go to your home, l'm very glad that you have come to ask me to go to your home for dinner.This is my wrong,but The reason why is my important test for the day after tomorrow. l'm very busy for Prepares a lesson。I wish you and your friends or family have a happy time。lf l have enough time ,so I will be on time to your home for dinner . Thanks for your invitation.