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假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing” 的英文稿件。 请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。
注意： 词数不少于60.
提示词： 游乐园 amusement park
垃圾箱 bin
句法知识不错，多多加强复杂句的练习；文中词汇多样性稍有欠缺，单词拼写也要更仔细；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
Yestaday,we had intensely discussed where shall we go for the springouting in the class.Everbady wants go to a place where there have mountain,revier and some interest places. Finally , We had decived to go amusement park in the next day. Today,It's a sunny, What a nice day .We climed to the top mountain, And the we found there are lots of rubbish overground.So ,we picked these rubbish up and classify them into the dustbin. I 'm so happy ,what a meaningful day it is!
