作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用学术词汇;句式变化较为明显,另外句法层面做的不错;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
In our world,it could be a normal phenomenon,many people will believe what they have seen and listened.To make decision and believe it by superficial phenomenon must be un advisable.Now i want to say some my opinions about it. In my opinions,the reason why people make decision by that way could be three.Firstly,people are lazy,they don't want to study some things deeply,so they choose to believe waht they have seem amd listened easily.Secondly, people are honest,they are easily to be tricked.Meanwhile,there are lots of ways to trick people,so they ,make decision by superficial phenomenon,and it's natural.Finally,people believe themselves,and even they couldn't change their minds,they had rather to believe that their intuition rather than scientific. All in all,we should look before you leap,and we can't be one-sided.
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