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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12895
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


用户的作文(系统评分77.0分
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

With the developing of economical,more and more people are choose to communicate on the internet instead of face to face.Although it is very convenient for us,we should also spend more time on our family.Because truly feeling should be affected by contact. For example,when we are stay in the camp all the year around and have no time accompany with our parents.Each to this time,our parents are thirst for seeing us and want to know whether we are live in a happy life.They can slap on our back and touch our face to tell us the feeling of love and miss. However,we chat on the Intenet lack exchange our emotion.

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