小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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Hello,everyone.I'm Kangkang.I have a dog at home.It is not thin and 9 years old.My family all likes it.It is white.He is honest.when I go home, I always see him at the door.We are good friends.At weekend,we go to the city anywhere.We go to the bank,golden,zoo and so on.We are always happy.He likes rice,noodles and so on.