英语-日语 - 地盘 - 记录 - 日志 - 下载 - 擂台赛 - 查词 - 翻译 - 排行
  • 登录
  • 注册
  • 建议

      
  • 公告
  • 常见问题
您现在的位置:首页> 大学英语> 英语六级> 真题> 2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4563
要求:
题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分55.0分
评语:

从句比例偏少,简单句稍微偏多了;希望学术词汇的使用能更熟练一些,还要加强单词拼写的检查;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

Thereis a hot discussion on whether the internet on interpersonal commuincation is good or not.Some people,especialy the old people are firmly insist that interpersonal commuincation is barely benefit for friendship.From the old to now,people talk with each other face to face.Howeve,adlecscents now prefer to chat by blessing keyboard,which totaly changed the way that anciets used to commuincation. Meanwhile,there are still some people espect that the impact of the internte on interpersonal commnication is just like a feature in the histoury of social development.By this new way,pepole can talk convinetly with someone who is far away from him. As for me ,I advice interpersonal communication is good for social advancing.There is a saying that"the world is always changing".

会员评论0个评论)
金币:2

ta的空间

ta写的其它作文
更多
  • 1
ta本期其它用户练习作文
更多
得分:88.5Laura_GG

人气:75发布:2013-12-07

得分:88.0Recapture_2

人气:78发布:2016-08-14

得分:87.5zzq8888zzq

人气:67发布:2014-06-20

得分:87.5Hakiki

人气:46发布:2014-07-06

得分:87.0conginjeno

人气:66发布:2013-05-23