从句比例偏少,简单句稍微偏多了;希望学术词汇的使用能更熟练一些,还要加强单词拼写的检查;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Thereis a hot discussion on whether the internet on interpersonal commuincation is good or not.Some people,especialy the old people are firmly insist that interpersonal commuincation is barely benefit for friendship.From the old to now,people talk with each other face to face.Howeve,adlecscents now prefer to chat by blessing keyboard,which totaly changed the way that anciets used to commuincation. Meanwhile,there are still some people espect that the impact of the internte on interpersonal commnication is just like a feature in the histoury of social development.By this new way,pepole can talk convinetly with someone who is far away from him. As for me ,I advice interpersonal communication is good for social advancing.There is a saying that"the world is always changing".
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