高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文中单词拼写做的不错，另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了；建议平时练习中，多多背诵一些好的句子和文章；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。

I come from a seaside city, where is beautiful and interesting.My mom tells me that i like the sea very much.A see IS good and blue.if you come you will love it revy moch.when I am a kid I went to it often and father an mother.the air is nice and no pollute at ALL it is a travelling city and mangy foreigners.