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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12880
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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句式变化较丰富,若注意文中个别句子错误会更棒;文章词汇表达稍显呆板,请灵活使用学术词汇,避免拼写错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段;可以适当增加副词的使用。

用户练习作文:

As we can see from the picture, parents in order to communicate with their child only can use computer rather than face-to-face commnicate. The reason is that with the development of the socicey,people perfter to use technology because this way is fashtion. scend, we like use computer to play games,so we have no time to communicate with others face-to-face.The most important is that electronic communicate can short time ,it benefit to people do others things.

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