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I am so glad to hear you are going to my hometown. I decide to show you some places of interest in my hometown,where you shouldn't miss them first, you should go to ciqikoua for a visit. It is a town ,which has a long history.There are many delicious food,you will enjoy them very much. In addition,you can have hot pot, which is famous for hot. The people in chongqing are extremely hospitable. I am looking forward your arriving