正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累学术词汇;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
How time flies!we haven't seen each other for a long time.All the things are pretty well.I just miss you very much. I decide to show you some places of interest in my hometown,where you shouldn't miss them. first, you should go to ciqikoua for a visit. It is a town ,which has a long history.There are many delicious food,you will enjoy them very much. In addition,you can have hot pot, which is famous for hot. The people in chongqing are extremely hospitable. I am looking forward your arriving