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How time flies!We haven't seen each other for a long time.All the things are pretty well.I just miss you very much. I decide to show you some places of interest in my hometown,where you shouldn't miss them. first, you should go to ciqikoua for a visit. It is a town,which has a long history.There are many delicious food,you will enjoy them very much. In addition,you can have hot pot, which is famous for hot. The people in chongqing are extremely hospitable. I am sure that this great experience visiting my hometown will be deeplycrooted in your memory and never fading from your mind. I am looking forward your arriving