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How time flies!We haven't seen each other for a long time.All the things are pretty well.I just miss you very much. I decide to show you some places of interest in my hometown,where you shouldn't miss them. My hometown Chongqing is a beautiful city,which is famous as the city of Mountain. first, you should go to Ciqikoua for a visit. It is a town,which has a long history.There are many delicious food,you will enjoy them very much. In addition,you can have hot pot, which is famous for hot. The people in chongqing are extremely hospitable. I am sure that this great experience visiting my hometown will be deeply rooted in your memory and never fading from your mind.I am looking forword to your arrival